tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post3088367399198898886..comments2023-09-10T15:57:43.129+01:00Comments on Novel Racers: Short SynopsesJenny Beattiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00640209636605410939noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-23928771030908248412010-02-10T20:00:51.807+00:002010-02-10T20:00:51.807+00:00I'm about to come down with another bout of sh...I'm about to come down with another bout of shed envy, and I've barely gotten over the cold! Ah well... Wish I had an editor I could bribe with doggie biscuits.<br /><br />The synopsis is the very last thing I do when I'm ready to submit the MS. I have to mentally drag myself to do it, kicking, sobbing and screaming all the way. It starts off at about six pages and I whittle it down a bit at a time. By the time I get to it the novel's been proofed and edited within an inch of its life and I'm at the point where I never want to see it again.<br /><br />So, uh, no. The synopsis doesn't help me that way.Liane Spicerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05035607144500219524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-5141131779326987572010-02-07T22:33:43.190+00:002010-02-07T22:33:43.190+00:00Hi Fia, I'm sorry to have missed your brillian...Hi Fia, I'm sorry to have missed your brilliant coffee mornings but at least I get to catch up with them now - and look forwards to following up the links. Thank you.Chris Stovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03741359642268813093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-63130710063327381912010-02-07T18:16:55.880+00:002010-02-07T18:16:55.880+00:00Great post Fia. I like to write the synopsis afte...Great post Fia. I like to write the synopsis after I've finished the novel. Like the Captain, I tend to write too much and then cut it down.<br /><br />Bramble is a little darling.Annieyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13466245069641820781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-83524675082261711962010-02-06T18:20:33.858+00:002010-02-06T18:20:33.858+00:00I really struggled with my synopsis. The original...I really struggled with my synopsis. The original draft I came up with was way too long and way too boring. Then a few people let me look at theirs as examples, and I finally realised what was required. I now have something I feel reasonably happy with.<br /><br />Captain's idea of evolving the synopsis alonside the novel is a good one and I will try to aim for that approach when I start the next novel.HelenMWaltershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16182100572365505905noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-1653002833029204262010-02-05T14:13:32.777+00:002010-02-05T14:13:32.777+00:00As a penance, I think we've got off extremely ...As a penance, I think we've got off extremely lightly (considering our sins). In fact as my current synopsis is as fluffy and wayward as the m/s, time spent honing a 500 worder will be very beneficial. Thank you.<br /><br />Love your guardian of the laptop:-)Lane Mathiashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08147122748453850264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-58617888805715043982010-02-05T12:46:14.594+00:002010-02-05T12:46:14.594+00:00If anyone is lacking in hair for their shirt I hav...If anyone is lacking in hair for their shirt I have 2 rabbits who could easily provide for all of us. I think they malt that much just for the pleasure of leaving it all over the house. I'm sure the wise Bramble is much tidier!<br /><br />I've been trying to write a blurb this week, in the hope it will get me nearer a title. That really does focus the mind and I've made some changes because of it. I have written a short synopsis but it's far from sparkly so I think I'll go looking at writewords - thanks for that. I've not really found mine useful, but maybe that's because it's not there yet!Denisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843258016706999464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-84062950379451823012010-02-05T12:26:03.488+00:002010-02-05T12:26:03.488+00:00Like most people, I loathe writing synopses. If I&...Like most people, I loathe writing synopses. If I've been clever, I've written chapter summeries into a seperate file as I've gone along, that makes it easier. <br /><br />Back of book blurbs -- hooks -- I find easier, but then I'm fundamentally a flash fiction writer.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-486840279951166632010-02-05T12:10:18.703+00:002010-02-05T12:10:18.703+00:00Morning all - I hate synopisisesisis - is that how...Morning all - I hate synopisisesisis - is that how you spell the plural? I hate them because as Captain Black says people assume that that's your book, black and white. For example I've recently done a synopsis for my new adult book and every one who's read it wants something different from it or likes different elements - and yet its not the finished piece - its a work in progrees. We have to live with them because they are an essential tool for pitching an idea. But keep reminding the reader that they are not the book - the book might be an entirely differnt animal and the book reflects your voice and writing style where as synopsis cannot. On another note a 500 word one is impossible - I've just had to write on for my new teen horror novel and it was fifteen pages long and took a week and a half. I think i would have been better off writing the book, but there you go!Rowan Colemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01207876813466262196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-45928303374659131482010-02-05T11:23:31.829+00:002010-02-05T11:23:31.829+00:00I forgot to mention that extremely handsome editor...I forgot to mention that extremely handsome editor. Love his photo, very fetching.Deborah Carr (Debs)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223653554549707595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-21825961098235844832010-02-05T11:22:43.987+00:002010-02-05T11:22:43.987+00:00I like the idea of writing a short synopsis far mo...I like the idea of writing a short synopsis far more than the lengthier ones, although I haven't thought of doing what Karen did. I like that idea.<br /><br />I write one with my ideas of the book before I start, usually about a page or so long, but this changes as the book developes.Deborah Carr (Debs)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03223653554549707595noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-85249424176460758382010-02-05T11:18:38.365+00:002010-02-05T11:18:38.365+00:00The synopsis I'm working on at the moment (for...The synopsis I'm working on at the moment (for a friend) is just over 7,200 words long. That's about nine pages of single-spaced text. Something tells me I've got a lot of summarising and chopping to do. Perhaps I should begin by writing a synopsis of the synopsis.<br /><br />So many writers appear to treat the synopsis as a write-once then set-in-stone component, and the process of writing it as a one off activity in the grander scheme of the project. I see it otherwise. You'd never submit your first draft of the manuscript, would you (KeVin, don't answer that)? So why treat your synopsis that way? It needs to be worked on, refined, edited and honed to perfection just like the main story.<br /><br />You don't have to write it at the beginning and then work religiously from it. You don't have to wait until the end and then fret about doing it. Why not evolve the synopsis in parallel with the main story? That way they can stay in synchronisation and grow up together.<br /><br />Bramble looks like a very serious and discerning editor. What are his/her thoughts on the matter?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-79719686067436236262010-02-05T09:58:05.096+00:002010-02-05T09:58:05.096+00:00I could never write a synopsis before the book bec...I could never write a synopsis before the book because I am such a panster. Afterwards I have written them and the first go is pages long - I let it all hang out. Then step by step I cut it down to the ket stuff - eventually I get to one page.<br /><br />I went on Cornerstones fiction workshop in September taught by Julie Cohen and it was fabulous. We looked at synopsis with Helen and it was really useful - one as a diagnostic tool for plot and two to look at the story as a whole entity.<br /><br />Great topic and I love your editor :-)<br />lxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02744937536946299450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-63336430358621554202010-02-05T09:41:36.647+00:002010-02-05T09:41:36.647+00:00How do you concentrate on working with that gorgeo...How do you concentrate on working with that gorgeous editor around?<br /><br />Uhm, right. Yes, for my industry day back in October I had to have an elevator pitch. I wrote and rewrote; sent it out to a couple of friends and eventually I felt it would have to do because my time was running out. I was astonished at how hard it was. It will need to be re-written again and again and again, I suspect.<br /><br />I like Karen's idea of copying a few for practice.<br /><br />Happy weekend all.Jenny Beattiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00640209636605410939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-16239517915249349722010-02-05T09:31:19.402+00:002010-02-05T09:31:19.402+00:00Very good post Fia - and I'm glad you have suc...Very good post Fia - and I'm glad you have such a trusty editor in Bramble! I think most of us find synopses incredibly difficult to do but I found the shorter version easier in a way - though I dont know what an agent would have made of it!Flowerpothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14102679179201725732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2143694367787566951.post-18326423739208838102010-02-05T09:12:53.106+00:002010-02-05T09:12:53.106+00:00Brilliant post (and photo!) Fia, and I must say I ...Brilliant post (and photo!) Fia, and I must say I found it easier to write a very short synopsis - much like the sort of thing you'd read on a book jacket. <br /><br />In fact I copied a few for practice - in the same genre as mine - adding my own characters and plot to the text and I found it really helped me focus on what my novel was actually <i>about.</i> Better late than never I suppose ... <br /><br />I did find after editing that I had to change my synopsis slightly, as some of the plot had altered as I went along :oO<br /><br />Could you spare Bramble to help me with mine? Please?Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05986874444030474719noreply@blogger.com