Sunday 28 October 2007

Free Critique from Agent

One of the lovely Novel Racers mentioned a First Paragraph Challenge as an alternative to a whole page and now I see that Nathan Bransford - www.nathanbransford.blogspot.com has offered a free critique of a sample of the winner's work. This has been good practise for me - I do need a stick or a carrot to make me work.
I have played around with my first paragraph and stuck it up there. It looks a little lonely amongst more able work but never mind. The deadline is, I think, Wed so if you fancy a go, the address is below and if any of you could let me know how you think my edited para compares to the first one I put up, I'd be very grateful.

Nathan's blog: Link

2 comments:

Nathan Bransford said...

Actually the contest already ended and finalists have been posted, but thanks for your interest!

Fiona Mackenzie. Writer said...

Thank you for letting us know.

Fascinating blog to visit anyway!